Forgotten by the Sun

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic

Nothing is as it seems. The stories we were told growing up as myths and legends were everything but that. Amika Fernandez couldn't seem to stay away. Everything about Rhayne and his family captivated her. Will she be able to handle the truth?... The secrets of this world?

Table of Contents

On the Run

    Amika threw her hair up into a bun, grabbed her coat, and ran downstairs as quickly as she could. School and late w... Read Chapter

New Students

  Amika doodled designs on her notebook cover as Mrs. White - the Physics teacher babbled on about... Physics. Feeling as... Read Chapter

Dream

"They are so cute!" Nikki screeched. "Who?" Amika asked as if she didn't already know who they were. Nikki frowned. "Yo... Read Chapter

Taken

Amika and her friends had just barely made it when the bell rang. "We better not be doing this every morning now," Nikki panted as sh... Read Chapter

Valentines Dance

"Maybe I shouldn't go," Amika suggested as Nikki and she got ready for the dance. Luckily, they had only a little homework, which was a m... Read Chapter

Revealed

Time crawled as the silence dragged on, like, what seemed like forever. The coffee shop grew cold and quiet. Looking into Rhayne's black ... Read Chapter

Waking up Dead

"How fast!" she yelled over her shoulder as she ran full speed down the hall. Yeah, so this was the best she could think of at the last s... Read Chapter

Valentines Day

Andrew waited as usual in front of Amika's house, and as usual, she was running late. Seconds later she burst through the front door, mak... Read Chapter

The Outside Worlds

    The next morning Rhayne did not attend school and Amika felt even worse. "It's Friday!" Nikki screeched. ... Read Chapter

Nathalie

Amika turned restlessly in her bed, she couldn't sleep as she thought about Rhayne and everything, he told her that evening. Most of all ... Read Chapter

Running Scared

"Uggh," Nikki groaned. "Why can't we just be graduated already?" she whined as she applied her eyeliner. "We will be soon and you're ... Read Chapter

Games

1667 San Pedro, Mexico I peered out onto the city. Death wasn't in vain to the poor unlucky bastard who had his heart ripped out. Wha... Read Chapter

Here

Amika lay wide awake staring up at the top of her tent deep in thought. She smiled recalling all the things that happened last night and ... Read Chapter

Blackout

It had been months since Amika had laid eyes on the new student Rhayne Welkins, and now they had been closer than ever. During those seve... Read Chapter

Distaste

"Wait, aren't you going in too?" Rachel asked when they came to the hospital. "No. Rhayne said that he had some medicinal herbs th... Read Chapter

Broken

9:45 am. Amika woke that morning well-rested. It took her a minute to remember all the things that had happened the night before. Whe... Read Chapter

Author note

For continuation of this series: follow me on wattpad: @Daylene151 or  follow me on Quotev: @Celeste Eismann  ... Read Chapter

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Recent Comments

Rob73

An entertaining YA novel.
The characters and story line is full of humor.
Great writing.

Sun, October 10th, 2021 8:41pm

Author
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Thank you

Sun, October 10th, 2021 10:22pm

cloud1408

Good stuff. I like that your characters are well developed and don't come across as typical archetypes. I look forward to reading the rest.

Fri, November 5th, 2021 11:14pm

Eraser

Hi, I spent a bit of time on your chapter. Let me ask you this: what's happening that would interest me as a reader? I don't mean this in a mean way as I think your writing has potential. But what are you trying to accomplish in this first chapter? They get up, go to school, and then walk home, talking about scary movies. What's the hook to draw us into the story? There needs to be some drama. Maybe you are setting up the rest of the story but you have to be careful because a first chapter really needs to draw the reader in...or they are gone. Maybe it's a secret about one of the characters, or a love triangle, or something. Think about what you want that to be. That way, when/if you rewrite the chapter, you can really hone in on what will keep us reading.

Mon, January 10th, 2022 10:04pm

Author
Reply

Thank you so much for your input. It is something that will be taken into consideration.

Mon, January 10th, 2022 5:09pm

charliemmurph

Good first chapter, but something should happen... at least at the end. A cliffhanger.

Thu, January 13th, 2022 12:35am

TRAY

I had trouble getting along with the first chapter but I made past it. It was a great read. Thank you.

Fri, February 11th, 2022 6:59am

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