My Girl

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Editorial and Opinion  |  House: Booksie Classic

I LOVE her!

My girl is a cheap and easy date,
My girl will determine your fate
No sense of humor, she's serious
Forget feelings, she's not curious
Has no emotions to act as a brake,
Instantly responds to decisions I make
Coldly efficient, she'll carry out her task
How you're feeling, she won't ask
A guard dog with nasty streak,
She has her own uncaring mystique
She won't talk back, does just what I say
At my command she'll blow you away
Protects property, riches and psychosis
Her and me have perfect symbiosis
She doesn't judge me as a crazy loon,
She's by my side when I howl at the moon
So, better not look at me sideways,
Her and me will end your pathetic days
The power of the Gods in metallic splendor
The great equalizer, final message-sender 

Submitted: March 25, 2021

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Very cleverly done, Mike!

Thu, March 25th, 2021 5:37pm


Thank you, Hull

Thu, March 25th, 2021 10:42am

88 fingers

I don't think this is what The Temptations had in mind when they sang "My Girl" in 1964.

Thu, March 25th, 2021 6:24pm


Probably not, or an updated version for 2021, thanks, 88

Thu, March 25th, 2021 11:30am

Penny Scribe

Wow, with that kind of support Mike, maybe you should run for president! Well done.

Tue, March 30th, 2021 5:28pm


Thank you, Penny, but not I, I'll keep my principals and pride

Tue, March 30th, 2021 11:15am

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