“The intruder”

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic


My friend and I had decided to sleep at our other friends house one night. We had just gotten back to his house from a party and there was some drinking involved so we didn’t want to drive home that night. 
Anyhow my friend was passed out around 1 in the morning while me and Jamie were watching Some horror movies on “Chiller Tv.” We heard the phone ring. Jamie answered the phone “Hello?” Nobody said anything. So he hung up. About a half hour later we had gotten another phone call. 
I answered it this time and asked “Hello is this the same person who called before? If this is a joke it’s not funny we are about to go to bed so don’t call back.” I hung up. We had gotten to our bedroom for the night.  we heard the phone again. We let it ring. It was about ten minutes later we heard a loud “bang” coming from the front door. 
I got chills as the banging got louder and louder and suddenly the door broke down. Jamie and I quietly hid under the bed. We heard footsteps run up the stairs and suddenly stopped at our bedroom. We kept perfectly quiet as we heard a set of footprints enter the bedroom. “Little pig where are you?” A voice whispered. 
“Hiding from me generally isn’t a good idea. Maybe you are under the bed?” We we’re both freaked out at this point praying he wouldn’t check under the bed. Suddenly Jamie’s dad called up to us “what happened to the door? This is going to cost a fortunate.” We heard the bedroom window open and shut. 
We waited a second and got out from the bed and ran downstairs to tell her dad what happened. Jamie’s dad at first thought we made the story up because we had been drinking but once he looked at the door knocked down he knew neither of us could do that damage. 
He called the police and searched outside of the house. We told the police what happened but had no evidence other then the door so nothing ever happened we never heard or saw the guy again we don’t talk about what happened that day anymore. Jamie is still in therapy over it. 
Our biggest questions are “who was the man and what would he do if he saw us? Nothing good I would assume.  


Submitted: April 19, 2021

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