Levitate

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is just me and my mind playing with words , on a word I wanted to understand "Levitate".


My mind is way above the clouds,
Meditating away from all the sounds,
Of the world and all the crowds.

Clouds are now above my head,
I guess I've been crowned with a white crown,
For leading the way,
I think I now deserve a white gown.

Birds sing me praises,
For flying alongside them
And showing them places.


Submitted: April 22, 2021

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Steven P. Pody

Marcus, your instincts are excellent. You should use words to match. Ignore my opinion, because your poem should be yours, ...but you seemed to settle cheaply in your ending. 'Places'? Seems weakish. A world of dazzle and impression to conclude your work and slap your reader in the eyes with wonder and power... How about 'infinite vision'? 'the strength of dream'? 'a boundless soul'? Etc..., my friend. Or not. Thanks for sharing! Steve

Thu, April 22nd, 2021 4:51pm

MarcusThepoet

Thank you Mr Steve , I'll definitely fix that next time.

Fri, April 23rd, 2021 4:57am

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