A Knockin'

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic

HUMOUR. KNOCKIN' ON HEAVEN'S DOOR?

Knockin'

 

There's

A knockin'

On my

Brain,

It's the pope

Of car

Wrecks,

Come to

Drive me

Over

The virgin

Cliff,

Of drunken

Wheelchairs...


Submitted: April 27, 2021

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88 fingers

"Keep a knockin but you can't come in." - Little Richard

Tue, April 27th, 2021 9:59pm

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Thanks 88, I saw Little Dickie in Sydney in 1973, all his make up ran and he threw his cheap calico jacket onto the girls who monstered each other over it!

Tue, April 27th, 2021 3:14pm

LE. Berry

Keep knocking...make it louder than before...loved this piece tom.

Tue, April 27th, 2021 10:07pm

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Thanks LE, to knock you must first have a hand...

Tue, April 27th, 2021 3:11pm

olive tree

Kind of reminds me of a Bukowski poem

Wed, April 28th, 2021 1:23am

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Don't know the poem olive tree, but thanks for the comparison.

Tue, April 27th, 2021 7:06pm

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