Deleted Blues

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic

i wrote this when i was sure it was a deletion, but now i wonder what's going on?

When it says you have a comment on a poem or story you wrote, click to see it, and there's none to be seen; did they delete it because they had second thoughts?
 
Ouch! Bitch-slapped from a distance 
By person's unknown; another fan lost
 
Knuckle-dragging bummer overwhelms me
From the correcting life-lesson I'll never see
 
Got me a bad case of the deleted blues
I must really suck, but don't have a clue
 
I wanted to know why but you took it down,
When deciding to pull it, you don't mess around
 
It's probable a good thing, and for the best,
'Cause to match your wit, but I'd be hard-pressed!
 


Submitted: May 05, 2021

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Sluggy

Oooops! I forgot to delete

Ha! I am quiet the opposite. No comments and no reads whats so ever. Oddly enough i had been plagued by senseless comments in form letter appreciation. All beging me to post on another site. I assume the moderator deleted all the mass comments from 4 or 5 spamer form letter writing nobodies. Any way... its better not having any comment than a form letter comment sent from spammers. Now i must send the exact comment to Hullabaloo, Sprinkly and my self. Ha!

Wed, May 5th, 2021 5:47pm

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Yeah I wrote this in response to getting one no comment there, but now I've gotten two more, so now I'm not so sure it was the author who deleted them; thanks, Sluggy

Wed, May 5th, 2021 10:52am

Sluggy

Oooops! I forgot to delete

Ha! I am quiet the opposite. No comments and no reads whats so ever. Oddly enough i had been plagued by senseless comments in form letter appreciation. All beging me to post on another site. I assume the moderator deleted all the mass comments from 4 or 5 spamer form letter writing nobodies. Any way... its better not having any comment than a form letter comment sent from spammers. Now i must send the exact comment to Hullabaloo, Sprinkly and my self. Ha!

Wed, May 5th, 2021 5:47pm

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Ha!

Wed, May 5th, 2021 10:53am

sprinkly biscuit

It happens ! Don't beat yourself up on something you didn't even read, being haunted by a blank page? Come on man , ..or are you taking the absolute vodka?

Wed, May 5th, 2021 9:37pm

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Thanks, S. B.; I'm not upset, I feel I can outrank the ranker, if that's what it was; I guess I'll never know!

Wed, May 5th, 2021 2:54pm

hullabaloo22

You know my thoughts on this, Mike. Excellent use of those ghost comments.

Thu, May 6th, 2021 7:15pm

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Thanks, Hull--now I'm not so sure their deleting the comment, or The Booksie Guy?

Thu, May 6th, 2021 12:25pm

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