On Tiptoe

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

cover image: pixabay.com.

On Tiptoe

A whisper

of movement, hushed;

tiptoeing

through a room of

‘Do Not Disturb!’


Submitted: May 16, 2021

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L.E. Belle

Lovely poem, Hullabaloo. I feel like this now. I just want to lie somewhere quiet and hide.

Sun, May 16th, 2021 7:25pm

Mike S.

A fine poem, Jull

Sun, May 16th, 2021 9:44pm

Mike S.

Hull not Jull, 'doh!'

Sun, May 16th, 2021 9:44pm

moa rider

Ever noticed leather soled shoes and boots walking along a footpath? Clack, clack, clack! Usianguke

Sun, May 16th, 2021 9:52pm

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Thanks, Moa.

Thu, June 10th, 2021 3:15am

Sluggy

Crimey! Here I am, a bull in a china shoppe. Trying to tip toe through oot a wee door. Ooooops! Maybe a good 'Do Not Touch' sign is needed? Too late though I done touched upon your moment of not wanting to be disturbed, with my big freaking toes. At least my written words kept you from hearing the thousands of wee Waterford shards echoing their final death screams... only to cut unsuspecting toes and cause even louder screams. Crimey! I am gone doorway and all, before I get a shoe up my bum.

Mon, May 17th, 2021 12:30am

Author
Reply

Haha! Thanks, Sluggy.

Thu, June 10th, 2021 3:14am

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