It's Nice to be Your Friend

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a poem that tells the story of two adorable friends whose friendship was tested.

It's Nice to be Your Friend 

Tooth and Cloud were two little bunnies who loved each other unconditionally. The whole neighborhood consider that they are inseparable.

Cloud was a little bunny with a pink nose, long white ears, a fluffly little tail and four small paws, his name was after his white fluffy fur, he looked like a cloud. Tooth, on the other hand, was brown with a black little nose, four cute paws that helped him jump very high and taller than he already was, his name was after his big tooth that helped him eat faster and easily.

 One day, Tooth wanted to surprise Cloud with a small gift which was a small joke to scare Cloud, he prepared a little clown inside the smal box.

He gave his best friend his gift which was beautifully wrapped and waited for him to open it.

A loud BOOM! was heard as soon as Cloud opened his gift excitedly, he was scared and with his eyes full of unshed tears. Tooth broke his best friend's heart. 

Cloud hopped off to his house to hide under his bed, clowns were scary to him and Tooth knew that. He was heartbroken and angry.

Tooth instantly knew he crossed the line with this joke. He hopped off to find Cloud and beg for his forgiveness and tell his best friend that he won't do it again. 

"I'm sorry, Cloud, I won't do it again" said Tooth. "You knew I disliked clowns, Tooth, why did you do it?" said Cloud in a crying tone. "I wanted to scare you, not hurt you like this" said Tooth, already crying too. "I'll forgive you because I know you didn't have bad intentions, but don't do it again. Deal?" said Cloud with open paws ready to hug his best friend. "Yes, yes, yes!" Tooth hopped happily towards his best friend. He was forgiven.

"I love being your best friend" said Cloud, happy to have his best friend back. "I love being your best friend, you're the best friend I could ever ask for" said Tooth, fondly.

 

Techniques used on this poem: 

- Imagery: when describing how the characters looked physically.

- Onomatopoeia: when Cloud opened his gift, what scared him was the loud sound along with the clown figure.

- Dramatic Irony: the reader knows Tooth planned a surprise joke for Cloud, but thr later didn't know about it yet.

- Dialogue: when Tooth asked Cloud for forgiveness, he was sad he broke his best friend's heart. 


Submitted: May 31, 2021

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