As far as I'm concerned

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

As far as I'm concerned

You're the wind, you're the rain.

You grow a field of love

But you're the source of my pain

As far I'm concerned

You define what's a friend

You're the depths that I drown in

You're the sky, you're THE END.

You're the barrier I must break

The risk I must take

You're what beautiful looks like

You're what thunder makes

You're what comes from the coal

You're the fire that burns

You're what heals the soul

You're what the hardest men earn

You're strength, but my weakness

You're waits the worthiest turn

You're God's gift to creation

As far as I'm concerned

You rewind time with your eyes

Your hair nests fireflies

If the ocean was ink

The whole world would die

For itd take every drop

To write how loved you are

How lovely and sure

To say whats most true

Say what men most yearn

You're God's star in the night

As far as I'm concerned

You're the queen of the roses

The lost dutchess, found

A princess of radiance

You turn darkness around

And you do it so masterfully

So effortlessly too.

You're the captain and pirate

And you always sail through

You've been cleared of your crimes

Courts forever adjourned

You're a jewel in Gods heaven

As far as I'm concerned

You're the dawn over the beach

You're the moon's glowing pulse

You're in my minds every prayer.

By your warmth, I'm engulfed

By you're eyes I am worthless

You're smile, I'm spurned

You're Gods greatest dream living

As far as I'm concerned

Submitted: June 04, 2021

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Criss Sole

This is beautiful and so full of raw emotion.
I see this clash of good and bad, pros and cons. But i suppose every relationship has that.
Very charming and touching poem, and i loved the rhyming.

Fri, June 4th, 2021 5:06am


Thanks so much for reading! Glad you liked it!

Thu, June 3rd, 2021 11:46pm

Sharief Hendricks

Ah yes just what we need on a cold Monday morning...

Something beautiful to warm our hearts !!

Loved it Penetentman

Mon, June 7th, 2021 8:59am

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