An Unexpected Thing

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Cover image: Pixabay.com.

An Unexpected Thing

It was not my intention when I set out for a walk

to come upon a rabbit that apparently could talk.

Perhaps it was unwise of me to set of in pursuit;

it set a very rapid pace – I had to go and scoot.

To me he seemed oblivious, could be he did not care,

as he set down this challenge that went: ‘Follow if you dare’.

And so he took me far away, to somewhere quite insane;

if you won’t embrace the madness, then I guess you’d best refrain.


Submitted: June 07, 2021

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Mike S.

A fine talking rabbiter, Hull

Mon, June 7th, 2021 7:42pm

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I've ordered a White Rabbit t-shirt so whenever I wear it, I will be literally following it. Thanks, Mike.

Thu, June 10th, 2021 3:10am

Norealle Ehab

The Alice in wonderland theme that you went for and the way you expressed it and also rhyming the lines, it all just fits perfectly and I really loved your way with words, keep it up :)

Mon, June 7th, 2021 9:55pm

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Thanks so much for such a positive review!

Thu, June 10th, 2021 3:08am

Jeff Bezaire

A nice teaser to that great adventure, Hully!

Thu, June 10th, 2021 4:16am

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Thanks so much for that, Jeff.

Thu, June 10th, 2021 3:04am

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