the view from here?

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The View From Here?



  As Mattie and Helena took the last few steps to reach the peak of their climb and step onto 


the scenic overlook, they simultaneously stopped and drew in a sharp and deep breath. Their 


heads seemed to swivel together as they absorbed the stunning view spread out before them 


in all its Impressionistic glory.


  Helena slowly sank onto a natural rock shelf, completely mesmerized, her eyes wide and 


unblinking. She absently pulled her oversized scarf tightly around her arms as she 


contemplated the glory before her. As she did so she quietly sighed. This view seemed to 


speak to her soul, to touch her heart.


  Mattie suddenly exclaimed “Oh my gosh! The color of your scarf matches those mountain 




  The magic was lost...

Submitted: June 08, 2021

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Serge Wlodarski

Funny story. Reminds me of people who say "We're going camping!", meaning they will drive their RV to a parking lot next to some trees.

Tue, June 8th, 2021 11:36am

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