The Future, a short poem

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A short poem

The world:

Increasingly violent, desperate

And hopeless.

The solution? No solution? 


Submitted: June 22, 2021

© Copyright 2021 Michael Licwinko. All rights reserved.

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Trindin Wright

Proper Discernment to distinguish the difference between Love and hatred. that’s the only solution. Love has a slight upper hand because Love is natural hatred has to be taught. For as long as this is true the next revolution is inevitable. By Love, I mean love of self then project that on to others. Everyone operates like a light switch. If you love yourself the light is on, if you don’t you live in darkness. Too many people live in darkness.

I dig the poem. I appreciate you leaving it a question vs a statement that there isn’t a solution

Wed, June 23rd, 2021 4:06am

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Hi Trindin. I'm not a poet so for one of my feeble attempts to elicit such a well-thought out response, well, I'm taken aback. Your words truly encourage me to become better at the craft.

I'm looking forward to reading your work.

Wed, June 23rd, 2021 6:17pm

MARIA OCHA

that was weirdly good.

Wed, June 23rd, 2021 11:07am

panteleon

Dear Michael,
Your poem is short by name and short by nature! And good fun prodding at a serious issue.
This is not a professional review either - we're all just having fun passing the time by writing down a few thoughts.

Mon, July 12th, 2021 7:23am

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