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Nice one, I love a good haiku.
Tue, June 29th, 2021 7:24pm
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I am glad you liked it. Thanks for your feedback.
Thu, July 1st, 2021 2:02am
Yep! There's a vine here with hooked thorns that we call bush-lawyer. A mate of mine was caught by the ear by it, just as he was about to cross and mountain shingle scree. He defied gravity for a time. Usianguke.
Tue, June 29th, 2021 9:11pm
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It sounds like the experience to avoid, very painful. Thanks for your comment.
Thu, July 1st, 2021 2:03am
Nice twist, Bert.
Tue, June 29th, 2021 9:36pm
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Thanks Jef.I appreciate your feedback.
Thu, July 1st, 2021 2:04am
Great play on " tear " Bert!
Tue, June 29th, 2021 11:42pm
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Thanks Tom. Sometimes, a subject just begs for a bit of playfulness like that.
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Excellent 'blood-rose' haiku, Bert
Tue, June 29th, 2021 6:29pmAuthor
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Thanks for your feedback, Mike.
Thu, July 1st, 2021 2:01am