If Saturn and Venus had a baby (part 1)

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Venus and Saturn made their powers conjoin, I am a product of the energy reaction. 

Away they send me to Mars, I felt exiled and abandoned but they were aware Neptune would soon adopt me into his faction.

They didn’t send me empty handed, thankfully. they bestowed upon me the ‘Handbook of the Mind of Jupiter’ by Gemini the Messenger written while he was fall.

I arrive to Mars and i am first accompanied by Libra, prepared me for social interactions, taught me the game and was there through it all.

The dust storms on Mars start to get more aggressive but Neptune orbits near to offer life through new lenses. 

I eagerly agree to take part of this new escape unaware i’ll tap into new senses.



Mars taught me drive but one can only have their foot on the gas for so long

What is success if the journey is pain

Neptune wanted me to dream and realize that all was wrong 

Why do they only see success as glory, riches and fame?

Too attached to the melody that I couldn’t see the real meaning of the song 

This is real life and i was treating it like a game

Ego confused and baffled at how i’ve been blinded this long

Expecting to soar through heights without any rain

Tunnel vision on the end game I didn’t know the journey was the answer all along

But then again one can only dream for so long.

Submitted: July 12, 2021

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very interesting poem check mine out some time.

Tue, July 13th, 2021 11:48pm

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