The Pit

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: Booksie Classic

When the ground falls underneath your feet.

Table of Contents

An ordinary day.


When the unexpected happens
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Sinkhole


The three men attempt to escape the sinkhole.
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Once more into the Breach


Thomas tries to escape the carnage and evade the new threat.
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The Descent into Hell


Thomas's realization that he may not survive.
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Recent Comments

hullabaloo22

A very well planned first chapter, dewey. Talking about the earlier earthquake and the way it had effected the different characters made an excellent contrast to the ending of the chapter.

Wed, July 21st, 2021 5:00pm

Author
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Ta mate! I had a vivid dream with elements of this story which inspired me.
It gets weirder...

Wed, July 21st, 2021 12:26pm

Rob73

An intriguing thriller novel that grips the reader from the start. The writing is excellent.

Wed, July 21st, 2021 11:58pm

Black Dog

Really interesting. Great pacing. Grabbed me instantly, I hope you keep this up.

Thu, July 22nd, 2021 1:14am

Keke Serene

Millennial are in their late 30-40s. Hope this is the age group you're going for lol. Interested to see where this goes

Sun, July 25th, 2021 10:59pm

Author
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Exactly, I appreciate the read!

Sun, July 25th, 2021 6:19pm

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