Oh that's bad
Says your face
But you are telling
Nah it's great
Why can't you smile
Is it that bad
Or your teeth
Are not brushed well
Some talk to me
Like I'm the only enemy
You may not mean
But I feel it that way
Smile, smile, smile
It cost no money
Laugh a little and feel
What's real happy
Submitted: July 23, 2021
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Nice work. Good luck on your future writings. ;)
Mon, July 26th, 2021 9:10am
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Thank you so much Mali
Mon, July 26th, 2021 2:13am
Nice job Diya...
When we were in school I remembered how your nose is turning red when you are laughing ..
I really miss those days ..
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Oh, don't embarrass me
By the way thank you buddy ..............
This poem made me smile :) It is indeed not difficult to smile but some people still refuse to smile lol. I smile and laugh and whenever I see someone being grumpy, I'll show this poem to them :D Loved it!
Thu, July 29th, 2021 7:19pm
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Thank you so much artistimichi
Your smile made me happy.
NICE Poem diyana loved it :)
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Thank you so much Sineli :)
Fri, July 30th, 2021 8:33pm
Really nice poem it brought a smile to my face, great job.
Besides I think we all can learn Smiles will brighten our day =D
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Thank you so much for reading =)
Fri, August 6th, 2021 9:23am
I like the use of casual language and jokey tones here. I can also relate to this as I’m often told I don’t smile enough. Keep going, you’re only going to get better.
Fri, August 6th, 2021 4:32pm
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Thank you very much Lucus
Fri, August 6th, 2021 10:26am
Nice one. It reminds that we need to smile more
Sun, August 8th, 2021 5:11am
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I'm glad that you enjoyed it =D
Sat, August 7th, 2021 10:13pm
I really like how this poem flows and it definitely made me smile :D great job!!
Thu, August 19th, 2021 7:05am
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Thanks a lot Roxanne
Keep smiling :)
Well Done! ????????????
Fri, August 20th, 2021 6:33am
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Glad you like it. Thank you =)
Thu, August 19th, 2021 11:46pm
Yes, exactly! We don't need reasons to smile and some people just smile on their own without knowing the cause of it. I'm always like that too. A very light and hearty poem:)
Sun, September 12th, 2021 9:58am
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Thanks a lot StormyIfI =)
Sun, September 12th, 2021 5:18am
Well done.....keep writing.
Smile will remain with u forever...
A smile is an inexpensive way to improve ur looks...
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Haha yes, the looks!
-Thank you :)
Excellent! It is a proven scientific fact, that it takes 43 muscles to frown, and only 17 to smile!
Mon, November 8th, 2021 1:02pm
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Of course .................
~Thank you
A Good poem, and good advice. Well-done!
Wed, December 22nd, 2021 12:35am
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Thanks a lot =)
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Good advice :) We should all learn to smile more.
Sat, July 24th, 2021 8:06amVery sweet poem.
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Thank you so much!!!!
Sat, July 24th, 2021 1:08amThank you for taking your time to read............