Chapter 4: Without You

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Trodden priceless love
Mangled naive emotions
For you left my heart and soul
I had a wonderful life with you
Now I can just feel blue
But it is too rejecting me
How wretched I am!

Fading cherished memoirs
Broken solemn oath
For you left my mind and breath
I was complete with you
Now I can just seek sympathy
But it is too neglecting me
How undesirable I am!

Grieving romantic poems
Soured sweet kisses
For you left my dreams and hopes
I was in bliss with you
Now I can just expect death
But it is too fleeing from me
How cursed I am!

Tell me my ruthless love,
Without you, is this really a life?

Submitted: August 17, 2021

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Bert Broomberg

I enjoyed reading this.

Tue, August 17th, 2021 8:40pm

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Thank you :)

Tue, August 17th, 2021 7:04pm

nikappuhamy

Oh!! So touching shri.. Why do you think that you are cursed?? You are such a great great poet!! I love the theme.. Breakup something right.. So nice.. I really like the poem.. Wish you all the best!!
Nishi = )

Wed, August 18th, 2021 2:30am

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Thank you very much Nishi :) I'm overwhelmed by your comment. Yes, it is about a breakup. I imagined how I'd feel if I was in a breakup scenario. Thank you again.

Shri :)

Tue, August 17th, 2021 8:11pm