Valriya (FINISHED)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Writers' Tree House

Valriya, a slightly over-emotional young woman, goes on a routine hunt with her brother, Agamemnon; only for everything to change.

(this is the full, finished draft 1)

Table of Contents

V A L R I Y A

      “We shall stand together.”   “Power Unrestrained.”   ... Read Chapter

Ockham's Razor

I was born into a secluded village far in the North; where snow and everlasting cold ran rampant and unchecked. Today Boreas must h... Read Chapter

Ockham's Razor p2


(Ockham's Razor is the name of the part, it is like one big chapter, but I think people will find it easier to read in little snippets due to their short attention spans(I'll stop insulting you
now))
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Ockham's Razor p3

"Valriya, I need you to do this." Agamemnon pressures me. "But... I don't want to leave you here... Alone." I feel the immense pr... Read Chapter

Ockham's Razor p4

Soft, thudding clonks could be heard through the storm outside. Geizel rushed outside, I got up trying to get out. Then Gabien and Geiz... Read Chapter

Ockham's Razor p5


"I am a prophet to the nations." - The prophet to the nations.
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Revelations


“Soon the Lamb of God will release the Revelations upon this world!” - Jeremiah, who predicted the name of the next part of Valriya: Revelations.
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Revelations p3


my chapters are gettting shorter oh no
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Revelations p5


"And now you'll never know."
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Revelations p6


Last chapter was getting a little too spicy, thankfully Jeremiah was there to save the audience from what would have been a cringy 18+ scene. I would praise him, but then I'd be labelled a heretic
and killed...
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Valriya


'Such was a force of nature: unstoppable, unwavering, inexhaustible, insurmountable.'
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Valriya p2


Yes, the third half (yes, its HALF the book) is just called 'Valriya'
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Valriya p3


"Don't tell me that 'it burns'." - One cocky bastard.
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Valriya p4


'I was just a girl' Yes, a girl with a (Curs-ed) dagger that a few millennia too early, as well as being a young adult. That's like all you need nowadays to succeed, right?
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Valriya p5


*faked, shallow edge instead of actual sadness with deep reasons*
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Valriya p7


Woah, the hell? The plot is picking up?! No... Impossible...
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Valriya p8


(Did Gabien... Enjoy that?!?!)
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Valriya p9


"I want to see you become...like me." - Ooops wrong book, sorry
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Valriya p10


A little shorter, just to give whoever the hell actually read this an easier time with this chapter.
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Valriya p11


*Author in tears for no apparent reason*
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Valriya Final Chapter


Yup... (Don't question the bs, in the grand scheme of another hundred books, it all makes sense :) )
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Recent Comments

Ann Sepino

Beautiful chapter! The action scene combines motion and description flawlessly. The characters' camaraderie is engaging, and the story pauses at just the right place. And I like the pacing a lot. I love it when fantasy stories don't rush readers from point A to point B.

I don't know how often I can check in on ongoing books at the moment, but I'm curious to know what happened to their village and what these brothers are gonna do next. Congratulations on a great first chapter. :)

Sat, August 28th, 2021 3:41pm

Author
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Thank you for the positive response! And the main character is Valriya. She's a heroine. They're brother and sister, although I guess I didn't actually make that clear, my bad!
I'm sure that this story will be a decent one, so do keep on guard :)

Sat, August 28th, 2021 9:05am

DiyaSL

Great chapter Gen. The start was amazing. As I love fantasy stories, I'll read this till the end for sure. The names are awesome. I like the name 'Valriya'.
I guess the chapters ahead are a little darker ;)

Tue, September 7th, 2021 11:02am

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*booming, evil laughter*

Tue, September 7th, 2021 6:46am

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