The Blue Butterfly

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

My poem is about a butterfly that flew because of a foolish act.
This Poem has a deep meaning inside.
Hope you will enjoy!


I saw a Butterfly,

That was passing me,

The way it was flapping,

Made me Mesmerizing.

 

Its Blue Shade,

That took my fate,

Not Realizing it was afraid,

Stupid me went to snatch.

 

When it flew,

I didn't knew.

It was the last time,

That I took sight of it.

 



Submitted: September 03, 2021

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DiyaSL

Great poem. It was lovely. As an improving point, I would like to say that It will be more likable to read if you maintain the flow of the poem. Anyways, lovely poem =D

Fri, September 3rd, 2021 7:13am

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Thank You for the tips & Compliments! ????

Fri, September 3rd, 2021 12:33am

Onethmee

Please ignore the question marks. I'm Sorry

Fri, September 3rd, 2021 7:39am

Poetshri

Wonderful! Flow is admirable. The message is simple but very true. :)

Fri, September 3rd, 2021 8:18am

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Thank You! :)

Fri, September 3rd, 2021 1:52am

nikappuhamy

Nice and lovely! I agree with Diyana and Shri.. The poem will be easier to read if the flow is going well.. You'll improve in the future.. Good Luck!!

Sun, September 5th, 2021 11:59am

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Thank You for the tips & the Compliments! I will do my best in the future.

Sun, September 5th, 2021 7:06am

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