Are You Coming Home?

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Are You Coming Home? It's Her Story



Been years since our parting

I knew you would leave

I only had to acquiesce



My love wasn’t enough

To embrace your dream

To fill your world



Wondering you found happiness

Worrying how you’d been

Couldn’t make peace with




Illness came to me

Became frail and feeble

Your line was down

You were found nowhere



Are you coming home baby?

May not greet you with

Sweet smile that you loved



But don’t worry, my dear

You can find the place

Where I am lying down

Near the small Sunday church

Where we used to go



Please don’t get upset

Please don’t get sad

Am happy with memories

That we were together



Please bring me daisies

Leave next to headstone

Then I shall know

That you come home

You come to me



When crisp breeze touches you

You know I am around

Am giving the last kiss

Saying Goodbye to my love



Will you lean over

Whisper You Love Me

I shall feel warm

And sleep in peace

Beneath the frozen ground - background picture of front cover


Submitted: September 06, 2021

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SM Aura Aura

Great piece. Always making me ride with your emotion, this time to profound loneliness. After reading this piece, I am wandering sometime and somewhere in my past when I had same loneliness and missed someone so much.

Tue, September 7th, 2021 12:43am


Thanks for the comments. Happy that you enjoyed this poem. Make you feel lonely and sad, I agree.

Tue, September 7th, 2021 2:55am

Francis K

For some reason, this poem's just taken me to my favorite number home sweet home by Motley Crew. (that was not a romantic love song though) Jator's works always bring me back to good memories ... old fading one.

Tue, September 7th, 2021 1:01pm


Thanks for the comments. "Oldies but Goodies" songs remind us of happy or memorable recollection that we miss so much.

Tue, September 7th, 2021 8:16pm


Touching and moving poem - nostalgia about long departed love and what might have been... Sensitive and endearing piece! ????

Tue, September 7th, 2021 3:01pm


Thanks for the comments. Well, it was past and we feel wild with all regret. Glad that you enjoyed it.

Tue, September 7th, 2021 8:22pm

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