Tender.

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic


Hiding,
It drives me mad,
I think I've gone mad,
I think I've slept.

I think I have slept,
I sleep too much,
Climbing back into the sheets,
When I feel myself get tired.
In and out,
Day after day,
After day,
After day.


Submitted: September 06, 2021

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HJ FURL

That's so expressive of how we all feel at times, especially since the pandemic struck. A great little poem.

Mon, September 6th, 2021 2:55pm

ratwood2

You created an image of turmoil quite nicely.

Mon, September 6th, 2021 2:59pm

Archia

I really enjoyed your poem. I may be wrong, but this made me think of depression; very tired, very monotonous each wrong. Whatever it is meant to express, I think it really captured that tired feeling of things continually going on the same. Great poem.

Mon, September 6th, 2021 11:12pm

88 fingers

This is true of all of us at one point in our lives. ""World....leave me alone!"

Fri, September 10th, 2021 11:02pm

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