I Wanna Get Better

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

The song came to me in the middle of the night, and the next morning I recorded it. This is the raw version and was created on Audacity with just my voice and a trombone.

Created: November 26,2021

I wanna get better.
I wanna get my life back together.
I wanna get on top of the weather,
So I can live my life free of fear.

But how do I do what I could not before?
And get what I want without wanting more?
Well how do we know that the air is real?
We just do because there's no other choice.

Submitted: September 16, 2021

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Woww!! That was so good. I didn't actually heard the audio version that u had put on Commaful, and I regret that, I'm so late to hear this beautiful piece!
Loved it so much! Good job
And btw , try out guitar some time too..

Tue, September 28th, 2021 3:43pm


Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I am learning the guitar, but I'm not quite good enough to use it to improvise music like this yet.

Mon, October 4th, 2021 9:25am


Love it! Catchy tune and your voice ain't bad.

Wed, October 27th, 2021 12:27pm


Thank you so much! I'm hoping to re-record it and make it more put-together next summer.

Fri, November 12th, 2021 2:12pm

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