A Libro Consiliorum Tale: The Originator

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Science Fiction  |  House: Writers' Tree House

Libro Consiliorum #8

1. Center body narration (first person): a person narrates seeing the world with their own eyes. - I see a ball
2. Outer body narration(third person): a god-like being narrates seeing a person in a world centered around the person. He sees a ball.
3. Inner body narration(second person): a person narrates seeing the reaction of themselves. You see a ball.
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You wake up. Its bright. Your sight becomes refined and objects near and far are in focus. You see a ventilator with lights and numbers moving across its OLED display. There are X-rays on the wall. You look to your left to look closer. The X-ray is the insides of what seems to be a fracture of the lower right shoulder. You look down and see two x rays with profiles of the skull. You wonder to yourself, “Is this me...?”. Your neck starts to hurt, it’s your throat. You realize your throat is sore and can not speak. You look to your right. There’s a door. You move your right leg down to the ground onto the floor. Your left leg, still under the sheets, slides off the bed and onto the ground next to your right foot. Your shoulders tighten up as your arm grip the edge of the bed. With a thrust, you stand and walk to the door. You forgot something. Your knees, now aching, channel a pain throughout your legs, into your upper body. You fall.

A table with medical tools helps you to reclaim your balance. As you get to the door, you open it. Outside, you find a lobby, circular in shape. A long hallway intersects the lobby and you proceed to follow it. As you look around you notice many other rooms that were identical to the one you woke up in. Everything was clean and new.


Submitted: September 25, 2021

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HJ FURL

Oh, I felt I was there!

Sat, September 25th, 2021 1:37pm

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