A Transforming and Revealing Critique

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Responding to a Booksie writer/reader's critique.

A TRANSFORMING AND REVEALING CRITIQUE

By Al Garcia

A fellow writer/reader, “bunni thompson,” just critiqued my latest writing, “Idiot’s Delight.”  She found me to be “childish in thought” and irresponsible in my thinking and in what I wrote.

I thought Booksie was about sharing our thoughts and our ideas, whether perfect, imperfect or simply percolating concepts in a mind filled with thoughts and notions of every kind and type.

I will stop writing further posts until my “childish” thoughts and irresponsible words and ideas can be replaced with more mature, responsible and substantial words and thoughts.

Thanks “bunni.”  Your words were both transforming and revealing.


Submitted: September 30, 2021

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