save me

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

there were times of struggle and times of hardship sometimes you just wanna give up.
to everyone who's living one day at a time or living to just live in whatever means you have i understand you.
i've lived that life experience.
i hear you.
don't give up never give in.
courage has no fear.

Save Me


Empty spaces in nothingness 

I feel so numb no feelings no emotions 

This is me now a soul less spirit living in an empty shell what happened to me?


Wide spaces, no places ,where can I go? What can I do? Who will Save me from this life no more.

Life is not what I intended it to be not this life not me.

I have nothing ,no one,just me.

Me, Myself and I 

Is this the life I dreamnt of? 

No not me 

Too many spaces 

Too many people 

But only one of me 

I'm alone.




I'm me 







Submitted: October 07, 2021

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Thank you Tinmiss, I really enjoyed your poem...

Thu, October 7th, 2021 3:23pm

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