Rose (Chapter 6)

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Sorry! This is a very very short ending!! if you can't remember what happened feel free to check the 5th chapter!!





When I opened my eyes, the surrounding was covered by a black coloured gas. It was hard to breathe over there. So, I crawled to the window and opened it. After a few seconds, everything became clear. Nothing is broken or missing. Oh, Jisoo! She fainted at that moment. There was a water glass on the table. I sprinkled some water into Jisoo's face. When she opened her eyes,

 "Lisa, are you okay?"

 "Yes, I'm fine. Are you okay?"

 "Yes. What happened?"

 "I don't know. There was a black coloured gas in our house when I woke up,"

 "Anyway, I'm happy that we both are fine,"

 "Yeah, me too."




You might think where is Rose. Yes, she's gone. FOREVER!! She has been taken to Transylvania, by her grandma. When a monster(I don't like to call them monsters, but I have to) changes to a human, the older ones gets an alert like thing to their antennas. So, they can simply catch the monster. I hope now you can understand what happened to Rose. Yes, her grandma came and brought her back to Transylvania. Jisoo and Lisa can't remember anything because both of them were hit with a powerful monster weapon called 'Gasylop.' It's a black coloured gas bomb-like thing. If someone, especially a human, was hit by it they might can't remember anything about the monster they used to know.

I know that this story doesn't have a great, happy ending.. But, this is also a story between three girls. Two humans and a monster girl..

You may wonder who is this, speaking to you. Yes, you read the whole story from Lisa's perspective. But, did you ever think that there was a special thing between the three of them? Try guessing. Don't know? It's me. I'm called the 'FRIENDSHIP'


-The End-

Submitted: October 29, 2021

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It's sad to hear that this will be the end of the story! But you have captured the 'Friendship' into the story nicely. Great Job =)
~Good luck for ur future !!!

Fri, October 29th, 2021 6:42am


Thank you buddy.. It was a little difficult to end this story.. And now I'm hlad that this ended in a nice manner(maybe not)

Thu, October 28th, 2021 11:57pm


Having read parts 1-5, I was slightly disappointed by this abrupt ending. But I do approve of the concept of the 'FRIENDSHIP' being the narrator.
And I take it that no one had actually submitted a potential ending for the contest?

You could have stretched the story a little more, get us really attached to the characters, which would have had a greater effect when Rose is taken away.

Sat, November 6th, 2021 1:32pm


Yeah! I know!! That's because I didn't have a very good idea to write the last chapter..
By the way, thank you for your comment Gen..

Sun, November 7th, 2021 4:54pm

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