Life

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Want to be inspired? Life is ___

Once it started

It has an end

Whether sad or happy

We have to spend

 

Life is a journey

Not a destination

You must have your journey

To reach your own destination

 

Life is a roller-coaster

With lows and highs

Fails and achievements

Beautify our lives

 

Life is

Like a riding bicycle

Have to ride it

To keep the balance

 

Life isn't about

Finding yourself

Life is about

Entertaining yourself

 

Life is much better

When you live in the presence

The time you enjoy wasting

Is not actually a time devastating

 

All we have

Is now!

So, live the life

And be happy as you can!


Submitted: October 30, 2021

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moon-light

nice job nika it's me vinu

Sat, October 30th, 2021 1:18pm

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Thanks a lot!!

Sat, October 30th, 2021 6:22am

Genzu4750

I admire the way of thinking, but i completely disagree with it...

I like how most stanzas start with 'Life is'
Good job on explaining what life is, but i think that you might want to add some rhymes in there to make it more appealing.

Sat, October 30th, 2021 1:19pm

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Thank you Genzu!!
I wrote this when I was a little tired. And that's why this is not that long and don't have many rhymes.. And I'm glad that you read this.. (Because I didn't read one of yours in a while.. I promise to check them now)

Sat, October 30th, 2021 6:25am

DiyaSL

Great job! I agree with Gen
Keep up the writing

Sat, October 30th, 2021 3:07pm

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Thank you!

Sat, October 30th, 2021 8:29am

FromBlackToViloet

This was wonderfully written! I really like the similies and metaphors you put by comparing life with a sense of something moving. Cause life keeps on moving even if we wanted it to or not. Then you add different sayings like a moral to a story like an end of a fairy tale. You did good keeping the poem flow, by each end of the line, since I noticed how it ryhmed from the first line to the second line like bicycle and ride it by bringing out the letter I makes the poem flow better and it stays with a beat. Overall, your message got across when you said Life is like one big thrill ride, but it's better if live in the now and not in the past. Funny how we're living in the present, but it's easier to think about the past and future. Good prompt with comparison of Life is like. I actually remember I had to do something similiar like this when I was in middle school or high school. So it brought back memories for me. Anyways, very good job, I see your growing stronger as a writer! Keep at it!:} Also one note with writing a poem, you don't have to upper case every first line of every stanza, but sometimes it always depends on the poet and what type of poem you wrote:} Overall, wonderful job.

Mon, November 1st, 2021 10:15am

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Thank you so much dear.. You always inspire fellow writers to write more

Mon, November 1st, 2021 8:40am

Poetshri

Interesting topic you've picked here. I loved "Life is a journey" and "Life is a roller coaster". That's the truth. However, some parts I didn't understand. I felt like there was a fight going on in your mind, when you were writing this. But I'm happy to see your poems here. That's really good. :)

Mon, November 1st, 2021 12:27pm

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Oh! I was a little tired when writing this.. But, I chose simple words to write this one.. It may be my fault because I'm still learning as a writer.. Thank you, for checking this out Shri!!

Mon, November 1st, 2021 8:42am

Thoughts Before Rem

This...is gorgeous I love how you break down your idea of life so smoothly.
Thank you for writing

Sun, November 28th, 2021 8:07pm

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Thank you for your kind words, buddy..

Sun, November 28th, 2021 5:34pm

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