Table of Contents
Chapter 1
chapter 2
Chapter 3
chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
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Richard C. Parr
There is a lovely introduction to the character and the atmosphere. There is darkness and a retreat to the past, and you bring in many elements of the past all at once. It is a fast paced read. I can feel the darkness in the story and you have set up a promising mini-cliffhanger into the second chapter.
Sun, June 12th, 2022 3:59amI am sorry to hear you have cerebral palsy. My heart goes out to you. Does it give you a greater ability to focus in your mind?
I suffered from a lack of focus during childhood because of escaping into the imagination to avoid trauma. This seems to have benefited me in ways of creating worlds in the mind, but I have had to balance this with meditation and finding a way to reconnect with my body.
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Thank you for commenting. When I focus on other things like writing, my body relaxes.
Sun, June 12th, 2022 9:23amWill you read more of Dinowar, soon?