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i read this and see the tags, and i can see you have alot going. i can see you did alot of thinking by the convo. i'd say the only two things you should work on is flow and intensity, only because you have so much potential in those two places. you say mutiple hearbeats, not just one, you can tell this man have strong feelings for this other man, a... Read More

Submitted on Fri, November 4th, 2011 7:01pm

i read your 'about me' so im not gonna half read it and try to come up with feedback instead of saying i love it and move on. im gonna half read it and tell you that it is really good writing- honest. but i dont like reading, not even best seller writing. i mean, i guess i can get into a book if its really really good, but you know what i mean. so ... Read More

Submitted on Tue, September 20th, 2011 8:45pm

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