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This honestly is a perfect first chapter. The charchters are well rounded and fleshed out, the world is interesting and well built, and your writing style sucks the reader into the story. If you continue to write like this, it'll easily get published. Looking foward to reading more

Submitted on Sat, July 6th, 2019 2:10am

I'm going on to the next chapter, but it is a huge pet peeve of mine when the MC speaks to the reader. It comes off as weak and bland and makes you look unprofessional.

Submitted on Wed, April 24th, 2019 10:22pm

I'm going on to the next chapter, but it is a huge pet peeve of mine when the MC speaks to the reader. It comes off as weak and bland and makes you look unprofessional.

Submitted on Wed, April 24th, 2019 10:22pm

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