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In my opinion, I would recommend you go through the text with a figurative fine comb. I understood every sentence, but it just didn't flow. Specifically: - Some paragraphs could be broken into two or more. - The mixture of tenses is confusing. - Some sentences were complicated due to having too many punctuations. - Some phrases need polishing... Read More

Submitted on Sat, February 16th, 2019 8:58am

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Another interesting anthropomorphic story, with a good blend of intrigue and humor. The setting of being tried in court was unique and worked very well, especially since it's a Kangaroo court that wants to punish the human for his ancestor's transgressions rather than determine whether if he was guilty of murder. One aspect which I think 'leaves... Read More

Submitted on Sun, February 25th, 2018 8:25pm

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Firstly, this is a fantastic piece. I hate horror and thriller, yet this was written so well and at such a good level that I found myself enjoying the read from beginning to end. It is in part due to it being thriller/mystery rather than jump-scare and gore. The description of most scenes was very well done, telling a comprehensive story while s... Read More

Submitted on Mon, February 5th, 2018 1:37am

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