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Fantastic like the other one! I really enjoyed this one, it reminds me of Assassins creed. When it first starts and says the tower, you shocked me by making it a guard tower, I was thinking "Assassin is up there," I was wrong. I like shock. I love how you described the blood pooling, and such, it brings it to life. :)

Submitted on Mon, April 30th, 2012 11:37am

I really like your story, I love how it starts with action. Most people start with descriptions but I love how you start it with action. I can't really focus today because I have a headache but I still love your story. Keep up the good work please!!!

Submitted on Sun, April 29th, 2012 10:31pm

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