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Chasing the Fairy Tale

Chapter 1 - Chasing the Fairy Tale

Iseret story is so sad. I mean, she never even seen her father :( Good start, I specially like the way, you ended the chapter, it keeps readers coming for more. Mystery always are so ummm.. I can't figure out the word :( What I'm trying to so say, is that mystery always attracts attention and you've certainly used this element well. Well done :)

Submitted on Mon, August 27th, 2012 6:42am

Crying in Pain

Chapter 1 - Crying in Pain

A truly sad poem, I can feel something there. And I liked the way you changed some cliche stuff and it made it in your own way that for some reason I couldn't do in my poems, lol. So, good job :)

Submitted on Tue, May 1st, 2012 7:18am

Moth Fire

Chapter 1 - Initiation

It's good, it have mystery horror and comedy which is not the combination I get to see everyday, so I really think you did well in this one,I just have one question. What's fresher?

Submitted on Tue, May 1st, 2012 7:08am


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