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Ahh okay, I see! Then please, excuse my rambling comment lol

Submitted on Fri, October 13th, 2017 10:55pm

Quite another read, Oleg! Much like your previous story, I enjoyed the humor, and really appreciated the flow of the dialogue and how nothing feels forced, but natural. The comments/thoughts Mr. Shlomo had about food, women, and others he encountered between conversations was a very good way to understand Shlomo as a person, who seems to have quite... Read More

Submitted on Thu, October 12th, 2017 9:59pm

Of course, and glad to know that my notes helped! I had somewhat of the same problem a couple years ago with my writing until a teacher pointed it out to me that a lot of my stories were being read like summaries of what happened in the story instead of the story happening as they read it, and that's the best way someone has told me that I'm really... Read More

Submitted on Tue, October 10th, 2017 11:26pm

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