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I really enjoy your style of writing, although it could do with a good edit. There are several grammatical and spelling errors. I love the emotion behind it and it pulled me right in. I think it's definitely worth a little more effort... :) Hope you decide to write more, and let me know if you do, yeah?

Submitted on Thu, July 2nd, 2015 6:04am

This is really interesting. I like the story, but the writing is at times confusing. I think it's just the different use of tenses and long run-on sentences. If it was edited up a bit, it would be great! I love the emotion behind it all.

Submitted on Thu, July 2nd, 2015 5:51am

This is hysterical. I can definitely relate to a few of these complaints. Haha. Well done.

Submitted on Wed, July 1st, 2015 7:41pm

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