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I've always thought that the beauty of poetry lies in how much can you pack in a line, instead of how much can you pack on a page (don't know if that makes any sense). The poem's nature gives it a broad message, but I think this is what you intended. The comment above says it's about capturing the "spark", but the concept of the cost (the burn) is ... Read More

Submitted on Mon, September 21st, 2015 8:41pm

The last line (the question) shows that you're just as lost as the reader in this persistent yet ultimately pointless search. I really enjoyed this

Submitted on Mon, September 21st, 2015 8:36pm

It is brilliant in its simplicity and easy flow. It is really hard seeing a loved one being lost in front of us, but I don't think it compares to the pain of them losing us. Great Piece

Submitted on Mon, September 21st, 2015 8:33pm

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