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Wow! Thank you so much Katilly! Every single poem was wonderful, and I am so grateful that this poem touched at least one person. I wrote it in a defining moment of my life, and it helped me heal a lot. Thank you so much for this wonderful opportunity!

Submitted on Sat, July 8th, 2017 2:26pm

Another wonderful piece of art, my friend! What I love about your poems are the unique twists you give in the end. I imagined the narrator and the girl weren't together, and that the narrator was longing for her love, as he took it for granted. I didn't imagine she'd still be with him! It's such a beautiful piece about wanting to go back to the sta... Read More

Submitted on Sun, July 2nd, 2017 9:50pm

This is one of the most wonderful things I've read in a while. I love how descriptive is line is. At first, it gives us the impression that the narrator is finally free from the chains that are oppressing him. One might say that the narrator died and is walking towards the afterlife, but then, when that twist at the end about descending like a fall... Read More

Submitted on Sun, July 2nd, 2017 9:46pm

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