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After reading that passionate letter, I felt that the transition between the letter and seeing Linda sobbing was too short. The letter was beautiful, and then BAM Linda's sobbing. I mean, of course you can let the reader conclude that she was sobbing due to the power and beauty of her ancestor's words... But still...I dunno. Too little space betwee... Read More

Submitted on Sat, June 12th, 2010 4:23am

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constructive criticism here :) some things were confusing..like when you said she turned to the bottle, I didn't realize you meant LIQUOR.. I thought you meant like bottle of milk or something for Lauren xD okay that doesn't make a lot of sense either..could be just me. one more thing, "At seven I went to bed at six in the morning", there are contr... Read More

Submitted on Thu, June 10th, 2010 3:01pm

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awww :) WAHHH I WISH IT TURNED OUT LIKE THAT FOR MEEE LOL

Submitted on Sun, June 6th, 2010 5:49pm

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