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Wow I was completely... whats the word?? Enthralled? In this haha!! I couldn't stop reading! I agree with the imagery. You did a great job of describing everything. Nicely written!! :D

Submitted on Fri, July 8th, 2011 3:21am

Wow I love it!! I really love the way you describe things in your poems. There's so much imagery: 'Listen to the waves as they hit the surface'.. 'Listen to my heart beat'... This is such a sweet poem. I love how it sort of leavs you wondering.. Sad but sweet!! :'(

Submitted on Mon, July 4th, 2011 2:02am

AWWWWWW OMG this is so sweet!! This paints such a beautiful picture in my head!! I absolutely LOVE the last two lines: 'In a world of imperfections.. There's you.' Great poem! :D

Submitted on Mon, July 4th, 2011 1:58am

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