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The topic is very good. Truth, specially it is your life. But gosh...its very unstructured and choppy. It would look a little professional if you don't chop every word Proper punctuations wouldn't hurt too. But way to go with the correct spelling, awesome. It could also use more imagery and polishing.

Submitted on Mon, January 5th, 2009 11:12pm

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......Why does it say 0 reads?... :/

Submitted on Mon, January 5th, 2009 12:27pm

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Keep going, I wanna see where this goes. Keep me posted too. I forget things easily.

Submitted on Sun, January 4th, 2009 2:32pm

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