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I really like this, very deep, and I like to see when it becomes a question of is the bad one really the good one. I like to see those kind of endings too. This is a really good story that keeps me reading to find out the next step, I like that, and even better when you can't guess it.

Submitted on Tue, June 28th, 2016 6:37pm


Really good, holds a lot of meaning inside.

Submitted on Tue, June 14th, 2016 6:44pm


An excellent story- thank you for sharing it. You built the tension up perfectly and wrapped it up cleanly and crisply- just as a short story should be. Nicely done.

Submitted on Sun, June 12th, 2016 11:41am

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