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by Wrulf

This a hauntingly beautiful poem, there were some words I don't think you used right but other than that, very nice, keep it up :)

Submitted on Mon, October 6th, 2014 2:32am

I agree with the user above, your grammar could use some work, also your sentence structure and choice of diction come off as a little awkward at times, but the story itself is great and I too love stories such as this one. Please please please pay more attention to grammar, it may seem small and insignificant but makes your work much more appealin... Read More

Submitted on Mon, October 6th, 2014 2:16am

this poem is very beautiful, I feel as though could have been extended some, it's great as it is as well. good job :)

Submitted on Mon, October 6th, 2014 2:09am

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