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You know what you have to do to gain your independence and show your mother what she is really doing. Even if she knows, you will be stronger than she knows. Maybe then she'll understand that you mean more than just a toy, or tool to be used day in and day out. That you are beautiful when you are free. Your expression of emotion in this one... Read More

Submitted on Sat, January 23rd, 2010 8:02pm

Honey, I miss you too like a frozen river that merely flows beneath. This last Christmas has been the best time of my life, and you can be certain that I will be returning to you. Because this poem is opening my heart so much, and your feelings. The poem itself is so true and loving. No poem needs to be perfect and that's the beautiful truth. ... Read More

Submitted on Wed, January 6th, 2010 4:28am

It's very interesting how you started this poem. The rhythm is well placed, and I like the rhyme scheme. I also like how you made the poem unique by starting it without a rhyme and then switching over. I enjoyed the over all topic so I give you a pleasant 'Well done'

Submitted on Thu, December 3rd, 2009 2:07pm

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