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I love Afiya. I don't remember him being a character in version one and if he was, he didn't play that big a part. I'm so glad you included him, especially what he said at the end. This chapter was a great balance of humour and action. The humour comes from Imran's attitude and pessimism, along with Afiya's role as the comedy relief. You've also gi... Read More

Submitted on Wed, February 15th, 2017 9:13am

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My one problem is the rhyming scheme. It rhymes in some parts, and not in others. My main thing is consistency, but if you weren't trying to rhyme then I have nothing wrong with this poem. It was eloquent and nicely worded. Very emotional and captivating. Nicely done. Seeya around! ~DJ

Submitted on Tue, February 7th, 2017 6:56pm

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Hope Leon doesn't resort to violence. He's a neat guy. I hear 'Mice and Men' is a good book, but I've only seen the movie. My mom just finished teaching it to her sophomore class. So...he got a job? Interesting. What a 'great' start to his first day. ~DJ

Submitted on Mon, January 30th, 2017 12:58pm

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