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We do what we do and the damnable thing is we have no way of knowing that we did or did not do the right thing. We cannot re-run our lives to see what might have been, if for instance in your case you did some work today. Of course we can dream of what might have been but maybe it is enough just to have been born and survive to an age where we c... Read More

Submitted on Fri, April 13th, 2012 11:12am

Good twist at the end. You could make it even shorter. We don't need to know that he is walking through a shopping centre for instance, but just that he is faced with a bewildering choice. Editing out what is not required often improves writing. All just my opinion of course.

Submitted on Fri, April 13th, 2012 10:41am

I'm glad I made you smile. I know full well why we were stopped - they wanted money. To this day I am amazed that we got off without paying any bribe, (it would not have been much) recovered the shoe, and heard no more about the incident. Something much worse happened the next day which relagated this incident to the status of a flea bite, an... Read More

Submitted on Mon, April 9th, 2012 12:11pm

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