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Letter From My Little Soldier

Chapter 1 - Letter From My Little Soldier

Perfectly beautiful. Nicely written with an edge of sadness that captures the readers attention. Keep up the good work. Liz

Submitted on Thu, October 15th, 2015 6:55pm

Psycho Path

Chapter 1 - Mania

Beautiful metaphors and descriptions and an interesting story. Well written... I only have one suggestion. In line 6 where you use they're, rather use they are. (Separate) It just sounds a bit better in the scentance. You are a great writer! Keep up the good work And share it with the world. Liz.

Submitted on Thu, October 15th, 2015 6:47pm

Reflection

Chapter 1 - Reflection

Beautiful poem, and a message I won't forget.^_^ ~Liz

Submitted on Fri, April 11th, 2014 6:10pm


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