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I absolutely lovee the line "Ensued by false hopes based on naked insecurity." In reading this I definitely felt the emotion, and almost heard the anger and passion as I was reading it. The voice was easy to catch and this was beautifully written.

Submitted on Sat, June 7th, 2014 4:06pm

This is beautiful, straight from the first line I was hooked. The symbolism was wonderful.

Submitted on Sat, June 7th, 2014 3:56pm

Your rhyming flowed beautifully, I especially liked the repetition of "three,two,one." This was beautiful and moving. Keep it up!

Submitted on Sat, June 7th, 2014 3:52pm

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