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Thanks for asking me to read it. I like it. I like at how you hint at being replaced by this man, those things which were 'ours' now being 'theirs'. It suggests how close you were with your friend, but also how jealous you are - but then you throw in the punch at the end. You're not jealous. You want the best for your friend. This guy is clearly n... Read More

Submitted on Sat, January 3rd, 2015 11:29am

I love the ending. You hint at so much throughout the whole poem, and leave a lot to the imagination. I often don't like repetition of a word in poetry, but you've used it well here, to build up to the final line. I like it.

Submitted on Wed, December 31st, 2014 6:33pm

I like this. It isn't easy to write a poem with so many couplets, and for it not to feel forced. I will return to this again, as there is so much depth to it, and so much I like about it, for example the line "Her nocturne fills the air, and I fall into her embrace". I feel the sense of conflict - this woman is clearly very tempting, but presen... Read More

Submitted on Wed, December 31st, 2014 6:27pm

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