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Storm Clouds Are Rising

Chapter 1 - Storm Clouds Are Rising

I really liked this; it was almost like as the poem went on it kind of painted a picture and it was calming but maybe you could have used a different word in the first verse instead of come, it might of made it flow better because right now come just kind of makes it stop and then you have to start up again. but honestly otherwise i loved it it was... Read More

Submitted on Sun, November 22nd, 2009 6:07pm

Shadow Ship

Chapter 1 - Shadow Ship

i really loved the description :)it just kind of made you want to read more good job

Submitted on Wed, August 26th, 2009 2:09pm

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