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Please read some of my writing. Thanks! By the way, in your profile, you used the wrong spelling of to. It should be too. Just another tip.

Hello =) I would love it if you could have a read of my new story 'The Burning Sword.' I would very much appreciate any advice and/or ramblings if you could spare a moment or two. Thank you so much!

Hey, I would lov if u culd read my novel "Forbidden". BLURB: Sarah, an outcast at her high school in a small town named Ashworth, is mysteriously linked to the nether land: the land of the dead. But that’s not all she’s linked to. Two vampire brothers named Stephan and Matt Dashtin share this link, meaning they are dragged with her to the nether land almost every time Sarah lays her head to rest. Stephan, murderous and ruthless, decides to track Sarah down to be rid of the problem. However, Stephan finds himself unable to fulfill his task. Instead of ending her life, Stephan finds himself trying to save Sarah from vengeful witches and angry vampires – including himself. The more Sarah learns, the more danger she is in as she finds herself following the same path as her mother, which led to her death. Does Sarah's future hold the same fate?